Whoa amazing, the shading is really good ! But I think you should have shaded on the bottom part of her face where the jacket is over her mouth since it would normally create a shadow (or your camera didn't pick it up )
Anyway really good, I'm finding myself super excited every time I see one of your drawings , keep it up until you become a successful mangaka!
Sugoi!! Just like [link] said. You are just like mangaka! I like your shading. it so~ smooth and flat (not like linely and unbalanced line shade).Also, I like your inking!! no miss space and no errors!! just like a digital arts!!
but there somethings wrong about my feeling... i dont know but i feel that somethings wrong in here, like something missing... by my instinct... somethings missing at her face... i dont know what though...
even so, i really like your drawing. inking is way more better than pencil. i bet you are using fountain pen, right? (i have one but is medium size... too big for lineart... only usable for shade / colour... im not that good drawing with pen...)